i like the shirt
Main account is MaddFlash.NewGrounds .com
Age 38, Male
Flash
Metro Community College
Papillion, NE
Joined on 11/30/05
i like the shirt
Very nice. Loads of feeling in it, and a very well thought out. I love the structure you used, A-A-B-A a break for the typical, A-A-B-B style.
I actually felt, and related to quite a few of the emotions expressed.
You've done a great job. :]
*I felt criticism on the poem deserved special attention due to the Dr. Pepper shirt.* *who knows why...*
JonBro
A dark and deep poem. It didn't make amazing sense to me, but still good.
My favorite part was the Dr. Pepper.