i like the shirt
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Very nice. Loads of feeling in it, and a very well thought out. I love the structure you used, A-A-B-A a break for the typical, A-A-B-B style.
I actually felt, and related to quite a few of the emotions expressed.
You've done a great job. :]
*I felt criticism on the poem deserved special attention due to the Dr. Pepper shirt.* *who knows why...*
JonBro
A dark and deep poem. It didn't make amazing sense to me, but still good.
My favorite part was the Dr. Pepper.